Caligula's Launderette

Hey, honey. Look, I finally scanned stuff in. If something is unclear or my handwriting is illegible please tell me. WATERBOARDING IN SCI-FI LAND How is it the worst torture? ...

I thought we should have a little party since I, despite my procrastinating self, have reached the 500 Review Mark. :P *passes out Hot Cocoa and lemon squares*

Hello, dear. Since this is the first time I've critiqued anything of yours, there is probably two things you should know: one, if you have any questions, ask them; two, ...

Hey, look, it's me again. You know the drill, if you have any questions or need me explain some illegible comment, please tell me. Ta, Cal. WE'RE GOOD LIKE THAT ...

Oh my fluffy lord! I finally scanned stuff. :P If you have any questions or need me explain some illegible comment, please tell me. NO, I DON'T WANT FRIES WITH ...

Just some lines thrown down on the page inspired by Milton's Paradise Lost o5 apr. satan gets all the best lines or thank you, John Milton I’d prefer not to ...

o4 apr. theoscope. I wish I could live lines like Mortimer*: as accurate as triangles and baselines made by the Ramsden diopter**; each dip and draggle of coast line something ...

Thank you so much, guys. Apparently, I can't spell though, so I've fixed all the errors in o2. Ta, Cal.

Suze, Me likey. Especially, the meter of the poems. One thing that struck out at me was in HUNGER the last line of stanza one, just kind of lays out ...

Leja, These are wonderful, little snippets; little not as in length but of expressions in time. I esepcially like variation i on april the third. Although your in april the ...

fghjkl! Will say something constructive later. :wink: i grow old. there is an uprooting of my spirit, i can feel it. the gut under my hands, pushed and round, dough ...

Connie, I think you have some great things going on here, but there needs to be some kind of punctuation. please? :shock: I especially like the first two lines of ...

Oh, wow, Jack. These are luscious. Some little things stuck out at me: In george , I do like stanza five, but I don't think it fits quite right. In ...

These next set of poems are supposed to be grouped together. It is an exercise I am trying out. They are on the same theme but the first poem is ...

Kylan < I am really not sure what exactly I was thinking for those words, but I am leaning more towards the 'these-words-fit-here' thing. *toasts* Here's to it. :D o2 ...